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Please report CLAWmarks32 errata here, or by mailing Ctheditors.
If you want to start somewhere, start proofreading the second half of CLAWmarks32.
"x,y" in Location means "Column x, Paragraph y". Roughly
Everything except Location is optional:
| Reported By | Type | Page | Location | Description | Status |
| Mark | F | All | em/en dashes | F | |
| Mark | S | All | use of "into" and "onto" | F | |
| Mark | S | All | write out single digit numbers | F | |
| d@vid | E | No credit for Ian K | F | ||
| Mark | S | 1 | Hyphenation: oh-so-fleeting | F | |
| Mark | G | 1 | para 5 | "boundaries you encounter be those" | F |
| d@vid | E | 2 | credit Ian Kitley in editorial | F | |
| d@vid | E | editor Ian Kitley, copy editor d@vid seaward | F | ||
| Mark | L | Shift Credits column to the left | F | ||
| Mark | S | 3 | 1, 2 | Adventures to Adventurers | F |
| Mark | S | 1, 3 | tabletop. Should be Table-top | X | |
| Mark | W | 1, 6 | “It is a very similar sort of thing where...” | I | |
| Mark | P | 1,6 | Missing comma after “However” | F | |
| Mark | E | 1,6 | Game Master without introduction or definition | F | |
| Mark | S | 1,6 | control-freak | F | |
| Mark | G | 1,6 | use of “their” as neuter singular pronoun. | F | |
| Mark | G | 2,0 | “ways of to encourage” | F | |
| Mark | G | 2,1 | missing comma after “In my opinion” | F | |
| Mark | P | 2,1 | full stop after end of quote "bits of plastic!!!". | F | |
| Mark | S | 2,3 | hyphen for make-up | F | |
| Mark | G | 2,3 | Dangling participle. “so bright that those clothes...” | F | |
| Mark | P | 4 | 1 | “we do...” missing fullstop | F |
| Mark | S | 2 | Nescafe, acute accent | F | |
| Mark | G | 2 | Not a sentence but a list. Previous sentence should end with semi-colon | F | |
| Mark | L | 3 | Line breaks a comma to its own line | F | |
| Mark | S | 3,2 | Nescafe, acute accent | F | |
| Mark | P | 4 | 1 | apposition of “of course” | F |
| Mark | F | prettier bullets | F | ||
| Mark | S | 2 | t-shirts to T-shirts | F | |
| Mark | S | 3 | t-shirts to T-shirts | F | |
| Mark | S | 3 | CLAWMarks to CLAWmarks | F | |
| Michelle | L | 5 | Zen & Art | Picture should be full page (*) | - |
| Mark | P? | 5 | 1,4 | maybes and perhapses, quote? | F |
| Mark | S | 2,2 | In to An | F | |
| Mark | S | 2,2 | Hyphenation of fourteen year-old | F | |
| Mark | P | 2,2 | Extra comma. “important to her she drew” | F | |
| Mark | P | 2,2 | Extra space after ellipsis | F | |
| Mark | P | 2,3 | Smart quotes. 'I didn't write this last night'. | F | |
| Mark | S | 6 | 1,2 | “whodunit” | F |
| Mark | S | 1,2 | player-character | F | |
| Mark | L | 2,3 | Rule 1: split across line | F | |
| Mark | S | 7 | 1,2 | t-shirts to T-shirts | F |
| Mark | P | 1,2 | double space (of/ /brand-name) | F | |
| Mark | S | 1,7 | favorite, US spelling | F | |
| Mark | S | 2,1 | onto, should be “on to” | F | |
| Mark | S | 2,3 | adviser | F | |
| Mark | G | 2,5 | often to stick close to | F | |
| Mark | S | 8 | 1 | synchronized | F |
| Mark | S | 1 | it's always nice to see | F | |
| Mark | S | 1,2 | briefcases | F | |
| Mark | S | 1,3 | blue-print | F | |
| Mark | G | 1,3 | appears | F | |
| Mark | G | 1,3 | appears, and your minions | F | |
| Mark | G | 2,1 | and Fiery Pits | F | |
| Mark | P | 2,2 | upper-tier | F | |
| Mark | S | 2,2 | loyalty | F | |
| Mark | S | 2,3 | apostrophe: it's time to...World Domination Mode. | F | |
| Mark | S | 2,3 | separate into | F | |
| Mark | S | 2,3 | metre | F | |
| Mark | G | 2,3 | increase heat in different ways... | F | |
| Mark | L | 9 | interrogation broken | F | |
| Mark | G | 1,2 | advantages | F | |
| Mark | G | being able to put pesky agents down faster | F | ||
| Mark | G | extra comma: experience killing enemy agents. | F | ||
| Mark | L | 1,2 | T/ /here split across column | F | |
| Mark | G | 2,1 | and Ivan the Red | F | |
| Mark | P | 2,1 | extinguishers). | F | |
| Mark | G | 3 | all those who oppose you. | F | |
| Mark | L | 12 | 2 | article chopped off | F |
| Mark | P | 13 | 1,3 | close smart quote | F |
| Mark | S | 1,5 | 40k / 40K | X | |
| Mark | S | 2,4 | write out number “five” | F | |
| Mark | S | 2,9 | separate into | F | |
| Mark | S | 2,10 | separate into | F | |
| Mark | P | 3,1 | tested/ /armies | F | |
| Mark | P? | 3,8 | Full stop after “What a raping?!?!” | F | |
| Mark | G | 14 | 1,1 | alternative THAN | F |
| Mark | F | 1,1 | editor's comment in italics? | F | |
| Mark | G | 15 | 1 | number of people | F |
| Mark | P | 3 | Full stop: unless a good band is playing. | F | |
| Mark | P | 3 | Full stop after Psycopath | F | |
| Mark | E | 3 | darklight.co.za. Add in http:// | F | |
| Mark | G | 16 | 1 | right way or wrong way | F |
| Mark | P | 1,2 | fullstop after end quote | F | |
| Mark | G | 1,5 | Such as a character | X | |
| Mark | G | 2,2 | try to cross the dangerous bridge | F | |
| Mark | S | 17 | 1,2 | separate into | F |
| Mark | W | 1,3 | to increase your edge | F | |
| Mark | L | 2,0 | orphaned line between columns | F | |
| Mark | P | 2,1 | full stop after end quote | F | |
| Mark | P | 2,1 | the myriad spells | F | |
| Mark | S | 2,2 | cut-outs | F | |
| Mark | E | 18 | 1,1 | use GM consistently | F |
| Mark | S | 1,1 | separate into: monsters into a bloody pulp | F | |
| Mark | P | 1,1 | comma: Later, roleplaying | F | |
| Mark | S | 1,3 | US spelling: heroic flavour | F | |
| Mark | S | 1,3 | US spelling: flavour of the game | F | |
| Mark | P | 1,4 | em-dash: has rules – unspoken social contracts | F | |
| Mark | S | 1,5 | an heroic | F | |
| Mark | G | 2,3 | as roleplaying in a single voice | F | |
| Mark | S | 2,3 | separate into | F | |
| Mark | S | 2,4 | US spelling: behaviour | F | |
| Mark | S | 19 | 1,1 | separate into | F |
| Mark | P | 1,1 | comma:In the end, | F | |
| Mark | P | 1,2 | comma: At the time, | F | |
| Mark | P | 1,3 | comma: Likewise, it is | F | |
| Mark | P | 1,5 | comma: Of course, sometimes | F | |
| Mark | L | 1,6 | indentation | F | |
| Mark | S | 1,6 | often: as one of//ten | F | |
| Mark | G | 2,1 | Create a new character now that you have a good feel for the rest of the group | F | |
| Mark | L | 2 | Large blank space at end of article | F | |
| Mark | P | 20 | 1,1 | remove extra quote: 'specially creating | F |
| Mark | G | 1,3 | split infinitive: to resolve quickly | F | |
| Tim | L | 2 | second column broken by card pic and sidebar | F | |
| Mark | L | 21 | large blank spaces | F | |
| Mark | P | 1,2 | comma: In combat, a significant victory | F | |
| Mark | S | 2,1 | US spelling “specialised” change to OED “specialized” | F | |
| Mark | S | 1 | work-load or workload. Use workload. | F | |
| Mark | S | 2 | focused/focussed. Focused is preferred | X | |
| Mark | S | 2 | work-load, hyphenation across lines | F | |
| Michelle | S | 36 | 3, both instances | Thurteem is correct spelling | F |
| Yancke | L | 40 | Dao of Sketch | Picture missing (*) | - |
| Michelle | F | 43 | Fridge Quotes | Need indication where quotes go together or are separate | I |
(*) if there's an option to add two full pages, might as well take it and add four - d@vid
Type Key:
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| Key | Type | Examples |
| S | Spelling | Typos, Clawfoo instead of CLAWfoo |
| P | Punctuation | general punctuation, full-stops, hyphens |
| G | Grammar | tense, concord, split infinitives |
| F | Formatting | bold, italic, smart quotes |
| L | Layout | articles cut off, text clipped too tightly to images |
| W | wtf | hideously fucked-up stuff |
| E | Error | factual/credit error |
Status Key:
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| Key | Status |
| - | Reported |
| I | Identified (Error noted, not sure how to fix it yet) |
| F | Fixed |
| X | Ignored / Rejected |
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hmm, the "into/in to" thing.
Not sure.
A US source:
http://www.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/into.html
I'd leave them as "into", but I'll need to check them again for the case where they should obviously be two words.